The Magpie's Advice


"The Magpie's Advice" or "The Magpie's Counsel" is a poem in the form of a cywydd by the pre-eminent Welsh-language poet, Dafydd ap Gwilym. The poet portrays himself as an overage lover who bemoans his romantic woes as he wanders through the woods, and is rebuked by a magpie who bids him concern himself with matters more befitting his years. It can be read either as a comic and self-mocking reversal of the traditional Welsh poetic trope of the non-human messenger, or llatai, being sent to the poet's lover, or as a meditation on the contrast between the yearly cycle of renewal in the natural world and the linear ageing of men, which falsifies any simplistic identification we may make with nature. It has always been one of Dafydd's more popular poems, surviving in 55 manuscripts and being widely translated in the 20th and 21st centuries. Sir Thomas Parry included it in his Oxford Book of Welsh Verse.

Summary

Lovesick and sorrowing over his golden girl, the poet is in the woods in early April. He describes the birds he sees and hears, the nightingale, blackbird, thrush and lark, and, feeling joy in the midst of his distress, observes the trees in their new greenery. A magpie building its nest there addresses him as "old man" and tells him he would be better off by a fireside than in rainy woodland. The poet replies that he is waiting for his girl and bids the magpie begone. The magpie says that talk of girls doesn't befit the old. The poet makes polite remarks about the magpie's appearance, while disparaging it and its nest in muttered asides. If it's so wise won't it advise him? The magpie tells him he has no business with beautiful girls; he should become a hermit instead. The poet promises us that no magpie's nest he sees again will keep its eggs or fledglings.

Manuscripts

"The Magpie's Advice" survives in as many as 55 manuscripts, and its transmission history is complex. Five of the manuscripts were copied by the 16th/17th century bard Llywelyn Siôn from the lost Llyfr Wiliam Mathew, a late 15th- or early 16th-century manuscript. Another three derive from the lost Vetustus Codex, an important collection of Dafydd ap Gwilym's poems copied c. 1526. Other notable manuscripts containing this poem include Cardiff Central Library MS 2.114, also known as the Llyfr Ficer Woking, and NLW MS 3047C, copied by the poet William Phylip.

Date

"The Magpie's Advice", like all of Dafydd's poems, cannot be precisely dated. The translator Joseph P. Clancy was convinced that it came from the last phase of Dafydd's career, which itself cannot be closely dated since scholars disagree as to whether he died c. 1350 or c. 1370, but Dafydd Johnston has warned against taking its references to the poet's old age literally and suggested that they may have been intended humorously, Dafydd's audience being well able to see his real age.

Analogues in Dafydd's poems

"The Magpie's Advice" shares themes, motifs and techniques with other poems by Dafydd. His skill in presenting reported speech in a racy, colloquial style despite the exigencies of a very demanding metre, apparent in "The Magpie's Advice", is also demonstrated in, for example, "His Shadow" and "The Dawn". Dafydd composed many poems in the form of dialogues with non-human interlocutors: "In Praise of Summer", "Despondency", "His Shadow", "Longing's Genealogy", "The Woodcock ", and "The Ruin". Of these, "Despondency" and "The Woodcock ", like "The Magpie's Advice", both describe debates about love with talking birds, and indeed "Despondency" includes a couplet almost word-for-word identical with one in "The Magpie's Advice". The magpie's criticism of Dafydd's way of life is reminiscent of that delivered in "The Poet and the Grey Friar", and the suggestion that he become a hermit is also made in his "The Girls of Llanbadarn". And just as he made light of the reverdie form, he did the same with other Continental genres in his "The Dawn", "Under the Eaves" and other poems.

Natural description and folklore

The first section, descriptive of an April morning in woodland, might be seen as a needless digression from the poem's theme, but Dafydd did not readily let an opportunity for natural description pass. Nor was he ignorant of his subject. He writes of the skylark's flight "on its backward course", apparently referring to that bird's habit of sometimes turning into the wind and being blown back by it. Several characteristics of the magpie, including its cunning and monogamy and the male's participation in nest-building, are, Rachel Bromwich notes, reflected in the poem, and she quotes the naturalist William Henry Hudson as writing that
Dafydd's portrayal of the magpie is also informed by Welsh folklore. Popular tradition considered the magpie to be deceitful and capable of human speech, and it was believed to be, according to the literary historian Dafydd Johnston, "a bird of ill-omen, with a drop of the Devil's blood in it". In Welsh poems of the period magpies were associated with Hell and the Otherworld; Dafydd calls it in this poem an "extremely vicious, infernal bird".

Editions

*

Translations and paraphrases

*